The college application process in the United States is incredibly daunting; after years of trudging through high school, the time comes to present yourself to schools throughout the country, in the hopes they will grant you admission to their school. Over the first half of their senior year, high school students will polish their achievements, take their ACTs or SATs, and construct applications that will best convey themselves to a set of anonymous reviewers. After submitting these applications, students anxiously wait months for each school to respond with their decision: acceptance, rejection, deferral, or wait-list.
The “Common Application” is a standardized application that a large percentage of schools in the U.S. utilize; apart from the standard personal information, there is a 650-word essay that haunts students throughout the entire process. While the prompts are rather vague and open to interpretation, countless students struggle with deciding what experience of their life will best convey themselves within the word-limit of this essay. With the multitude of thousands of students applying to their school, students must utilize this essay to distinguish themselves from the endless pool of students.
Undoubtedly, most anybody who knows me has associated the Rubik’s Cube with my name. For those who don’t know, the Rubik’s Cube is a three-dimensional twisty puzzle that saw great popularity in the 80s but has undergone a significant resurgence within the past few years. This puzzle has conceived a hobby known as “speedcubing,” which is simply the act of solving the Rubik’s Cube and its variations as quickly as possible. Seeing as I had been speedcubing for six years by the time I was applying to colleges, I decided to base my essay around this hobby, as I knew this abstract topic was my best chance at separating myself from this pool.
I submitted this essay to a few schools: notably Miami University (Ohio), Purdue University, and the University of Michigan. I was fortunate enough to be accepted to all of these, and I ended up choosing the University of Michigan. Over the course of my 2.5 semesters here, I’ve wondered why I was accepted here; my grades were decent, my extracurriculars were adequate–but I can’t help but believe that my essays were a large part of the reason I was accepted. While some considered my decision to focus my Common Application essay around speedcubing as a “shot-in-the-dark,” I disagree. This is a topic that my reviewers were unfamiliar with, but I focused on providing as much background of my hobby as possible to ensure the reviewers understood the true purpose of my essay, and I believe I succeeded in this respect.
In total, my goal of this essay was to explain how I took a task that seemed near-impossible (i.e. solving a Rubik’s Cube) and shaped it to become such a significant portion of my life. This was in response to the prompt of: “Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.”
(So, naturally, speedcubing fit perfectly within this topic).
To preface this essay, I will gladly admit that this is not my best work of writing. I definitely felt the 650-word limit forced me to refine my writing, but there were certainly stylistic choices and segments that were removed in order to account for this. While it did achieve its purpose, as I got into my dream school, there are certainly areas I would alter. Regardless, I will divide this essay into sections, focusing solely on the structure, content, and purpose of each so that prospective college applicants (or speedcubers) reading this can learn a thing or two.
“You’ll never be able to solve that; it’s impossible!”
My mother’s words echoed through my mind as I unwrapped my final Hanukkah gift, a Rubik’s Cube. I grew up with a hunch for solving puzzles, so naturally I was intrigued yet slightly intimidated by its complexity. Nevertheless, I mixed up the cube and attempted to bring the colors back together, quickly realizing that any hope of completing the puzzle was rapidly fading. After months of searching for the seemingly impossible solution, the thrill transitioned from simply completing the puzzle to solving the cube as fast as possible.
Admittedly, this section does not contribute much to my essay’s purpose; rather, it was designed to preface my introduction to this hobby and provide some background into how I was introduced and describe the goal behind the Rubik’s Cube. In some sense, this section was designed to be “artsy” and entice the reader. I felt the quote succeeded in intriguing the reader to discover what exactly was considered “impossible,” which is a concept that shaped the foundation of my essay’s purpose. Looking back, I would have preferred for my thesis to focus more on the cube taking over such a significant degree of my life, as “solving the cube as fast as possible” seems to over-simplify the impact. Regardless, the thesis at least demonstrates that my interest in the cube increased, and I believe this is sufficient to transition into the body of the essay.
About a year after indulging in this hobby, I had the opportunity to travel to Columbus, Ohio for the U.S. National Championships. I distinctly remember spectating the finals of the main event, the 3x3x3 Rubik’s Cube, and intensively watching the finalists perform their solves. Dan Cohen, Rowe Hessler, Anthony Brooks: these were just meaningless names to any non-speedcuber, but these were the idols of my hobby. I was inspired, to say the least, and I hoped to have the opportunity to compete on this stage someday.
So, my intent for this essay was to briefly discuss my first experience with the cube and quickly progress to attending U.S. Nationals 2010, which I knew would be a solid benchmark to focus on within this essay. Through this description of the finals, I wanted to convey my feeling of awe from spectating. These were individuals whose videos and solves I analyzed day-after-day, and to see them in person made me feel as though I was in the presence of celebrities. My desire was to highlight the idea that this selection of highly-dominant speedcubers were just average people to mostly anybody, but I idolized them and sought to be as fast as them someday. This idea was included to demonstrate the “niche” aspect of this hobby, as my fascination with these individuals was not shared with many; the hobby was so small that seemingly nobody would comprehend the overwhelming impact these individuals had on my passion.
I think this is one of several sections that suffers from the word-limit. It almost seems as though I am setting the scene for the focal point of my essay, but I quickly move on and ignore this. I would have loved to elaborate exactly on what these individuals meant to me, but sadly I don’t believe there was much I could have changed, given the word-limit.
I am drawn to these competitions due to the consistently encouraging, positive atmosphere. Contrary to most other sports and activities, each competitor is competing against him or herself. I attend these competitions not to triumph the other competitors but rather to have a joyful time with like-minded individuals–with the hope of breaking some personal records. Each competition is an opportunity to share speedcubing knowledge and create friendships that often stretch beyond the activity: these privileges are much more sacred to my heart and my experience at these competitions than the sheer aspect of competing.
Looking back at this section, I feel I should have included the number of competitions I had attended (which I believe was somewhere around 70-80) and mentioned how far I have travelled to attend some of these competitions. This would have helped greatly in conveying how much I committed myself to this hobby, but I once again believe the word limit led me to cut this from my essay. Regardless, I believe I succeeded
My main intention, though, was to convey the atmosphere of the competitions since this is a significant portion of the reason I continue pursuing this hobby. As those who have competed will understand, speedcubing competitions are unique in the sense that they are less focused on “competing,” per se, but rather they are a “gathering” of like-minded individuals who share a niche passion. Although getting personal bests is nice, the memories that persist throughout the plethora of competitions I have attended often occur outside of competing, and the friends I have made through the years I have committed to this hobby certainly outweigh any of my experiences through competing.
Although there is more I would have liked to include, this section forms a rather natural progression from the preceding and proceeding sections. With the previous section focusing on my feeling of awe, and the next section focusing on what I have given back to the community, this paragraph was designed to explain what inspires me to contribute to others’ passion for this hobby.
I began as merely a competitor at these competitions, but I quickly became interested in their inner-workings. Currently, I work with the Cubing Club at the University of Michigan to organize competitions that have recently attracted over two hundred competitors, a growth of over 200% since the first Michigan competitions. Our hard work has rewarded us with the opportunity to collaborate with the diverse, hard-working staff of the U.S. National Championships to ensure the competition runs smoothly and efficiently. Organizing these competitions becomes hectic at times, but I acquire such an immense amount of experience with leadership and organization from collaborating with my fellow organizers that each sweat and tear becomes a trophy of my dedication.
I wanted to transition from the previous paragraph by highlighting that within a few years my focused shifting from simply attending competitions to assisting with the organization and staffing duties wherever possible. Essentially, I wanted to show how I “gave back” to the competitions that sucked me into this hobby in the first place. Throughout this section, I mentioned how I helped with the organization and gained experience, but I fail to explain my role within the organization and exactly what “experience” I gained. I should have at least mentioned the importance of quick decisions, coordination, and professionalism as an organizer/staff member, and perhaps included some kind of an example of these qualities within this paragraph or my conclusion. Then again, this would have taken a significant toll on my word-limit, but I should have given priority to this specific area regardless.
P.S. I have no idea where I pulled the “200%” figure from, but I believe it was based upon the first Ann Arbor competition, which had somewhere around 60 competitors, and Michigan 2016, attracting nearly 200 competitors. I personally am not a fan of this usage, but it was definitely a concise way to explain to what magnitude Michigan competitions have grown since their inception.
Along with the honor of being a staff member, I qualified for the final round of the U.S. National Championships this past summer, a goal that I set out to achieve since my first U.S. National Championships. After the tens of thousands of hours that I spent practicing and perfecting my skills, I had finally achieved the pinnacle of my speedcubing career. As I walked up to the stage, I remembered how envious I was of the competitors on this stage a few years ago, and I realized that I was now one of them. I thought back to my timid, reserved ten-year-old self, filled with awe and envy towards my idols. I have shaped myself to be a passionate, hard-working individual due to the time I have dedicated to this hobby. Although I may not be well-rounded in athletics, proficient in musical instruments, or a natural genius, I am gifted with a hobby where I am able to form unimaginable bonds with like-minded individuals from around the world. Pursuing the hobby of speedcubing has allowed me to grow more as an individual than I could ever imagine, and I take pride in every single friendship and quality that the hobby has gifted me over the years.
The fact that the summer before submitting this essay was my first time making finals at U.S. Nationals was quite convenient, and I used the experience to highlight my feeling of “awe” from spectating the finals of the first U.S. Nationals I attended. I remember not being too satisfied about this conclusion, but looking back two years later I am surprisingly satisfied with the result. This conclusion succeeds in tying the aspects of my essay together: the journey from first solving the cube, to setting a specific goal of reaching the finals, to organizing and helping at competitions to benefit the community, and to finally reaching my goal. This second-half of this section focuses on self-reflection, where I tie everything together and highlight how exactly this hobby has changed me. It shows that what really matters to me is the aspect of belonging this hobby has provided me. My ambitions within the hobby transcended from solely completing the puzzle to pushing it to its limits and seeking to establish an impact on others.
All in all, I am satisfied with how this essay turned out, but as expected there are aspects I would have changed had I been given another opportunity. Looking back, it seems I succeeded in giving the background of the hobby; whether that be the puzzle itself or the structure of competitions. However, I think I failed to elaborate on the exact qualities this hobby has given me; commitment and dedication were certainly conveyed, but expanding on the qualities I acquired through organizing and assisting at competitions would have significantly improved this piece. I feel the introduction and conclusion were the strongest points of my essay, with my success in displaying an abstract hobby to my reader through the sole utility of text, and clearing any feeling of confusion or uncertainty through my conclusion. While I often fail to keep the audience in mind when writing essays, they were of significant importance to this essay, and I believe I succeeded in ensuring the reader is able to perhaps never seeing the cube before to understanding why I would go to the length of focusing such a significant portion of my college application on this specific topic.
In light of this, I felt I should address some concerns others have about structuring such a critical work of writing around the topic of speedcubing. To these, my gut response is “why not?”. Frankly, speedcubing is bound to be one of our most unique attributes, and these are exactly what reviewers are scouting for when they read your essays. The wonderful thing about speedcubing is that the hobby encompasses so much; even if you haven’t organized a competition or been on staff for a large competition, I am a firm believer in the fact that you can focus an entire essay on the friends you have made, the concepts you have learned, or your commitment to improving. As long as you ensure your analysis of the hobby highlights the qualities that you hope to portray to your reviewers, I’d wager that writing about speedcubing is an entirely rational decision.